Friday, March 13, 2009

More learning from the mistakes of others

Continuing my anonymous lessons taken from the writing mistakes of others:

If you herald the beginning of spring in chapter one, it is probably not a good time for the protagonist to enjoy a healthy vegetable salad made from local produce. Think about it.

1 comment:

  1. Oh, very good catch, Barbara! Would it be like having cheese just ten minutes after milking the cow?